Plan: The chronology of shots within my film (so far)

1. Shot of stain glassed window.
2.Yellow paint dripping
3.Green paing dripping.
4.Red Paint dripping.
5.Black- Writing appears (education...)
6.Toilet door.
7.Black- Writing appears (female...)
8.Girl putting mascara on.
9. Washing Hands.
10. Perfume on.
11. Putting bag on.
12. Smoke from boys mouth.
13. Black- Writing appears (male...)
14. Boy rolling cigarette.
15.Looking at phone.
16. Exhaling smoke.
17. Coughing.
18. Long shot of girl accross the road.
19. Over shoulder shot of girl on bench.
20. Blinking girl.
21. Boy blinking.
22. Over shoulder shot of boy on bench.
23. Long shot of boy on bench.

This is as far as I have got when it comes to the order of shots. I haven't quite worked out how to end my piece. Because it's slightly surrealist and I aim for it to be relative to each individual person watching it, I almost want to leave it on a cliff hanger. Thats the reason i'm only having little snippets of the character. I dont want the audience investing the whole time in these characters, I want them to think about things relating to themselves, or opinions they have.
Although i've written a bit of speech for the characters, its going to be incredibly minimal and it will be recorded, so it's more of a narrative. This leaves who is saying it open to interpritation.
One of my main worries is that i'm not going to have enough content. I know from past experience that its important to film as much footage as I can, and from different angles and things, however because all of my shots are going to be fairly short im going to need a lot of footage.